Hello my friend @adeljose,

I really enjoyed reading your short story about a boy's visit to an amusement park.

Your description of the experiences and emotions the boy felt while riding the attractions is captivating. The idea of a "magic" in the park was well portrayed, giving the story a fantastical element.

Your writing style is engaging and brings the reader into the story. It's great to see that you have a passion for writing and sharing your ideas with others. Keep up the good work! Your writing skills will only improve with time and practice. I hope you continue to participate in writing challenges and share your unique perspectives with us .

Regards
@artist1111