That Creepy Feeling
Prologue
Good day friends, I wasn't happy that I couldn't win the previous contest, I knew my story continuation was amazing and awesome but I think I couldn't win because there was a rule I didn't abide by.
Today am here to try again as we all know of the popular saying that says Never give up. I will start by displaying the beginning of the story by the contest organizer, before I will finish it. It goes like this 👇
Della lived in a posh flat with her husband in Dubai. After a few months of her marriage, her husband Martin had to go to Europe for a week on an official tour.
One night when she was sleeping in her room, suddenly her TV switched on which shocked her. She immediately got up and turned off the TV, and tried to sleep. After a while, she realized that someone was lying on the bed next to her. The TV was on and then the feeling of someone's presence was enough to scare Della. She was alone in the house so she kept lying on her bed without even moving an inch.
She was scared to death but to convince herself, she thought that perhaps this would be her illusion. But after a while, she again felt as if the mattress of the bed was pressed, and someone was turning towards her.
Della had goosebumps and was scared like heck. She couldn't understand what was happening.
Let me continue the story now 👇
That Creepy Feeling
Della got up from the bed immediately and rushed to turn on the light. She became more scared as she didn't see anybody on the bed. She became scared of entering the bed. She decided to arrange a blanket on the floor so that she can sleep on the floor.
This time around she felt a very hot water dropping on her legs from the ceiling, she screamed and touched her legs as she rushed to turn on the lights again. She decided not to switch the light off anymore so she laid down on the floor and decided to check the time on her phone.
She searched for her phone in the room because she couldn't see it where she normally keep it. All of a sudden she started hearing her ringing tune near the drawer. She rushed to take it there as she thought she has finally seen her phone. She went there and became more surprised as she wasn't seeing her phone anywhere around the drawer but she was still hearing her ringing tune close to it.
She has opened the drawer and removed everything inside but yet she hasn't seen the phone. She shifted the drawer and checked the back of it but she couldn't see her phone but she was still hearing her ringing tune. Suddenly her pillow fell from the bed and hitted her, she quickly shake her body and fell on the floor, sweating profusely.
She saw her phone on the bed and went to collect it to know who was calling. She unlocked the phone and was surprised that she wasn't seeing any missed calls at all. She checked the time and wanted to call her friend to inform her of what is happening in her house. There was no longer network in the house that night so she began to cry.
She sat on the middle of the bed crying quietly, she was praying for the day to bright and the night to end but the night seems to be longer that day. Della thought to herself that she has been lonely several times but she has never felt this kind of loneliness before.
She thought of spending the rest of the night in her neighbor's house but she was more scared of going outside because of That Creepy Feeling. She continued crying as she began to see shadows walking on the walls of the room, she threw things at them on the wall in other to chase them away but they never stopped walking and she became terrified as soon as the shadows began to change figures into something huge and scary.
The shadows joined together in Della's presence and they began to expand, it was now touching the ground and coming towards the bed Della was, as soon as the light switched itself off all of a sudden, Della screamed loudly immediately and fainted.
Epilogue
Della tried her best to remain strong and fearless but the horror things she experienced increased and was without control, out of shock of being swallowed, Della fainted in the darkness. Thanks for reading friends. Special thanks to @dove11 for creating this contest.
Your story was not bad but you know only three can win and as you yourself said
I guess that's the mantra of winning. I would have not mentioned you if I thought you were not good at winning. But we all know that losing is part of the game 👍
Note: My friendly suggestion - Give a read before hitting the post button
Alright boss
I have proof-read it and I have made the necessary correction.
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