Hello @timani,

you did great however i don't think you read the achievement 3 content etiquette post.

please read it here;

https://steemit.com/hive-172186/@cryptokannon/achievement-3-mentor-by-cryptokannon-content-etiquette
and don't forget to add this to your post;

I have read and understood the Steemit Etiquette on Steemit Community and will do my best to embrace them

Try to apply some of the paraphrasing markdowns and let me know after editing