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RE: My dairy activite

in Newcomers' Community3 years ago

Sorry about the loss. Its always so painful to lose a close friend. Courage especially to his parents. The way Bamenda is now you have to really do things and leave when the day is still on.

Just my little advice. Always review your post. I could count up to 4 gramatical and vocabulary errors

1.We say wake keeping "which " and not who

  1. Due to insecurity we had to "leave" and not left early
  2. With my "weak" and not week heart

Total review before posting will do good and gain more attention.
I for one i follow up new comers and really encourage you to do your achievement tasks as well as participate in ongoing contest in your community,#steemcameroon.

Also put in more efforts to powering up. Thos will be building your own future and that of others .

Your DIARY post should carry the heading" THE DIARY GAME:DATE then you proceed to the main body

Lastly make sure you post at all times whether you get juicy votes or not. They will come with time

Steem on bro

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