Hello friend, welcome to Steemit. I would like to mention some points you’re missing in your achievement no1 post

1. Add pictures of your educational institutes along with their names.
2. Write about your work with proper pictures.
   Add reference from where you get to know about steemit.
3. Mention what your post will be about on Steemit.
   Also you can check my achievement no1 post for guidance ☺️
   (https://steemit.com/hive-172186/@fatimafahim/achievement-no-1-verification-through-introduction-by-fatimafahim)