the language is beautiful, the rhyming works perfectly.

Thank you so much.

Nietzsche said God is dead. You don't go there, but you observe the vacuous space in which we live when received truths are questioned, and perhaps shattered.

Definitely, and I've been exploring this idea all through my writing recently. I wrote a sci-fi story today where an AI is the narrator and it quotes both Nietzsche and Socrates in the opening narration. That story explores the strange paradox of the universe's nature of finding patterns in chaos. An oxymoron I know, but on a huge scale I think there are many of these types of paradox operating at a fundamental level within the systems that make reality what it is.

ha ha, then we get on to the question of perception, and if reality as we describe it is really real... I don't want to open that can of wrms this late at night lol

Thank you for your insightful and meaningful comment agmoore. It really made me think :)