Amazing story and its subject, it felt like I was watching a Hollywood movie in 3D, rather when a man was jumping 40 meters high, his legs hit my forehead. But then the same thing happened which happens while watching 3D, it was an illusion. It was a Mayazal created by you. By affecting 1.5 million people with radio radiation, you have left behind even Hollywood directors. Their thoughts are also engaged in destroying the humans of this earth.
That was fun friend, you should become a script writer. I only write the story, you have written the whole scene. Which the readers will see.
Good job.