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RE: CONTEST & Winners! Choices! What will it be? #60 having me.
Thank you for taking part in this week's contest.
You have covered the topic of the city well.
The only tip I can give you is that you must break your paragraphs up into smaller ones. This will make it look neater, plus it will also read easier.
Good luck with the contest.