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RE: STEEMIT ENGAGEMENT CHALLENGE SEASON2 2 (WEEK 4)| THE WORST DAY AND THE BEST DAY OF YOUR LIFE - A TRUE LIFE STORY! BY @tenguhatanga.
Thanks for participating in the engagement challenge @tenguhatanga I enjoyed reading your post.It was properly detailed and captured the questions been asked by the contest post.
Your worst day taught you that it is not good to disobey and tell lies to your parents although you recieved serious pain courtesy of been spanked.
The best day which was your graduation day was a memorable one as you graduated with first class.This shows that you studied hard and your effort came to fruition.You can work on splitting your work in paragraphs for easy reading friend.
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Thanks for grading my post and making the corrections bro
Those life lessons from childhood are good memories which I will tell my children as stories one day. Going against your parents is the worst thing you can do for yourself.
You are very correct.I cant agree less.I have a lot of childhood experience and lessons that I will use to teach my descendants.Although the spate of indiscipline will increase as the year goes by:a fulfilment of the end time signs of christ's teaching..
You have more experiences? Can you share with me? I am beginning to imagine what they were. Despite the changing mentality and evil rising in our society we still need to instill discipline to our children no matter what. We can't just side back and watch them go astray. I am sure Christ will not be happy if we do that rather it gives us an opportunity to preach the word of God to our family and friends