ProWriters Hub Week 6: Look Before You Leap - An Imaginary Story By @saintkelvin17

in SteemAlive2 years ago

Introduction

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Hi steemians, am writing to share a story written by me, writing stories is what am 100% good at. "Look before you leap" is a saying that means the act of thinking of the consequences of doing something before deciding whether to do it or not. Today I will share a story about a young brilliant guy who didn't end well in school.

The foolish brilliant student

Once upon a time there lived a young boy named Cletus. Cletus was a good boy who was always obedient to his parents and teachers. He was the only son of his parents and his parents have always love him for his good behavior.

Cletus was one of the best student in his class and his peers and teachers have always love him for this. Cletus will always read ahead of his teachers and he always ensure he does all his assignments before going to play.

Cletus was also trustworthy both in the school and at home. He doesn't tell lies nor does he steal from anyone. Anytime there's a donation among his classmates, the teacher always gives the money to Cletus to hold it till they all want to make use of it.

Years later when it was time for Cletus to go to the university, his parents warned him strictly never to associate with bad students in the school, they didn't advice him much because they trust him and he's now matured. When Cletus finally left, his mother and sisters cried because they will miss him.

Cletus who wants to be a medical doctor, tried all his best to achieve his goals and make it life. Cletus will always study just the way he studied hard, back then in he's secondary school days. He improved more in his academical life and was really happy about it, he was also a lover of all, in the institution.

Something happened on the third year of study in the institution, Cletus had a new roommate named Simon and popularly known as "Big fish" because he's a cultist. Unfortunately Big fish influenced the other guys in the room and they all became cultist. It was remaining Cletus and he never wanted to leave Cletus behind.

Big fish (Simon) is always seen pestering Cletus to join cultism but Cletus will always refused, reminding Cletus of the consequences of being a cultist and Big fish will always laugh each time Cletus tells him that. Big fish boldly too Cletus that all those consequences of cultism he has been taught in school were all lies that they doesn't exist. Big fish assured Cletus that nothing bad will happen to him that he will still be a brilliant and good guy.

Unfortunately, Cletus finally joined cult and told Simon and the other roommates that there's no big deal in becoming a cultist that all what Big fish said was right and Cletus' roommates hailed him. Each time Cletus wants to study, his roommates will come to him saying there's a meeting they need to attend immediately, most times they will meet him around 12am in the night and Cletus will foolishly follow them.

One year later, doing an operation in a bank, Cletus shot an old woman and a little girl and they died instantly. Cletus, his roommates and the remaining cult members rushed back home after carrying out a successful operation. Cletus' roommates who also killed some people in the bank, hailed and started saying things like. "brave man", "rugged doctor", "doctor cultist" and so on. Cletus wasn't happy within him, he realized that he killed innocent that souls that day. He also realized he's no longer doing well in his academics, he now was having three carrying overs.

One day during their usual operation, Cletus and the others were arrested and Big fish escaped. It was then Cletus parents knew he was a cultist as it was announced all the television channels and radio. Cletus parents cried and his father was rushed to the hospital as a result of heart attack but later recovered two weeks after

One the final day of judgement in the law court, Cletus was sentenced to death by hanging. When it was time for Cletus to be hanged to death, his father walked up to him and told him this "my former son, I wouldn't call you my son because you have highly disgraced me and now am feeling as if the problems of the entire world is hanging on my heart. Cletus if only you had looked before you leapt, you won't be where you are today, good bye you foolish son" Cletus parents left and said they are never coming back for his dead body.

Cletus wept bitterly 😭 and cursed the day Simon started living with him and his roommates, he also cursed the day he said yes to cultism. Cletus said his last prayers and got ready for death. Cletus was hanged to dead and his dead body was sold to the institution he attended and his own course mates saw used his body to carry out experiment in the school medical laboratory. His classmates cried when they first recognized his body. Some said if he had looked before he leapt, he would have been alive that year to carry out the experiment on another dead body.

Conclusion

Dear steemians am sure you all learnt something new from my story. Please endeavor to look before you leap, in anything you are doing in this life. Bye for now.

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 2 years ago 

Such a sad ending. Cletus had no time to change his ways. Sadly, many young people have been influenced by their peers to join bad groups and some end up like cletus. Its better for them to consider the effect of such decisions and refrain from doing what will hurt the. Better to look before leaping. Inspiring story @saintkelvin17

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 2 years ago 

Cletus wasn't happy within him, he realized that he killed innocent that souls that day. He also realized he's no longer doing well in his academics, he now was having three carrying overs.

Cletus didn't look before he leaped that's why he fell into their trap
Regrets normally come last when the deed has been done and it's actually funny that Cletus' body was used in the lab for experiment 🤣🤣

 2 years ago 

yeah really Cletus felling into their trap was really interesting I really love that parts

 2 years ago 

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 2 years ago (edited)

Cletus wept bitterly 😭 and cursed the day Simon started living with him and his roommates, he also cursed the day he said yes to cultism. Cletus said his last prayers and got ready for death.
I petty for Cletus and hate what Simon did to him this story is really interesting and really supper cute

and also cutisim is really a bad department that someone should engage on thanks friend for teaching us lot of things from what you have said I really appreciate

 2 years ago (edited)

What a story to learn from cultism is a very bad society someone should join in this world. Because it will eventually lead to untimely death no matter what

 2 years ago 

yeah this is the worst department that someone reasonable should not try to engage his self too because it is really harmful and has killed lot of souls

Yeah @rochy20 but some still See's it as a big boys club even when they know the implications

 2 years ago 

Agreeing to peer pressure to indulge in heinous crimes, bad lifestyle is really bad and should be handled seriously.

his parents warned him strictly never to associate with bad students in the school, they didn't advice him much because they trust him and he's now matured

Cletus allowed peer pressure to make him disobey his parent and not stick to their advice. It's really a pity how he ended up.

 2 years ago 

yeah we all should not make them decide on what we should do imagine someone deciding to Cletus to disobey his mother that is not really good amd I cannot do such a thing

 2 years ago 

I'm glad you know that disobedience to parents is wrong, even the Word of God is against it.

 2 years ago 

This is am interesting story. I feel like catching that Big fish of a stupid boy. See how he wasted an innocent boys life. Well is always good to follow the right way no matter the pressure.

Nawa oo, such a painful story. We should always check the people we hang out with. Friends can make or mar one's future.

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