Steemit Engagement Challenge Season 2 (Week 4)| The Worst day(About the death of my father)and the best day in my life- A true life story!

in SteemAlive2 years ago (edited)


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hello beloved friends how are you all doing I hope all are well this is are good and perfect Contest that everyone should take participate in will be taking about the worse day in my life which still made me feel sad whenever I remember it and also the best day in my life that I can never forget still I die really sure that you all will love reading it and also learn from it I also promise to do my best to be among the best winners

The worst day in my life(Is About my father's death😭😭😭😭😭😭

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the worse day in my life happened on 4th november2012 whenever I remember this I feel like killing myself and also cry betterly this is all about the death of my father he died on his early 40.How it happened it happened on Saturday being fourth November my father and I was at his barpalour where he Normally sell drink that day by 9:00pm in the night so I was discussing with him that day and also he was tell me some folkstales I was his favorite child and he loves playing with me so that night we was discussing when some of his friends interrupted our conversation so I had to live him for them to discuss when I was about to live there present he ordered me to get some beer/drink for them to drink so I ran and bring it and also he said that should also bring his food and one soft drink for him to drink I also ran and bring it so he said that I should go inside and stay that after his coversation then I can come and continue listening to him so I agreed and went inside so when the where eating his so called wicked friends poisoned his food 😭😭😢 after they had finished eating and talking I cleaned the table and remove all the plates I also thank God that I didn't ate his left over poisoned food that night so ater then it was 10:30 he started packing to that we can go inside and sleep after closing our shop me him and my mom slept in the same bed while my other siblings slept in our room.
so at the middle of the night by 12:00pm he started vomiting out blood and also some particules of his heart he coutinue vomiting out huge amount of blood and seriously coughing 😭my mom wake me up and we and we started praying for him my and my mom prayed so serious and my mom was really crying and shedding tears seriously while my dad was slowly dieing and also on the floor we prayed prayed prayed and prayed that night and it slowly claimed down my dad slowly stop vomiting blood again that night so I'm mediately my mom gave him olive oil to drink and also a warm water after drinking it he started crying and saying some rubbish word like my mom should take care of us and he is coming back after this we stayed some time then he slept off and also we all slept . exactly it was6:00am in the morning he started vomiting whiteddist liquid from his mouth then my mom started crying and shouting for help all our tenants came out I rush home to the hospital in reaching to the hospital he slumbs and die😭😭 I hate sharing this information to people this is the worst day that I can never forget still I die

best day in my life

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the best day that I so much love is about my birthday party my school interhouse sports. my school interhouse sports is the best day in my life i so much love that day and also I can not forget it this happened on 5th March 2021 it was so beautiful and interesting and also funny we did many things that day that made me laugh.in my school interhouse sports I was in yellow house d my house was the best house ever we took the first postion and we are always the best .on that day we did many sports ativities like tables tennis football sackrace this is the one that made me laugh that day because many person fell down millions of times and some was just raining slowly also we played volleyball game which I so.much love playing this game and table are my best game in volleyball I had gone to many tournament and won with my group I am the best in my school so we play volleyball which we also won and beat the other houses black and blue that day was so so nice that I cannot forget it

What contributed to that worst/best day experience?

The worst day
things that contributed to it

  • the poison by his wicked friends
  • vomiting of blood and whiteddish liquid
  • taking him so late to the hospital
  • envy and wickedness
    The best day
  • many funny display by the DJ
  • many excited games display by the students
  • my house won the golden cup
  • matching by the students
  • gifts and taking funny pictures

What did you get wrong or right on that

day
things that I get wrong on the worst day
I did nothing wrong on that day I was only crying betterly with my Mom who nearly fanted that day because it is not easy to lose someone you so much love especially you partiner husband /wife I was really sad that day also I even wanted to kill my self with a knife
things that I get wrong that day
also I did nothing wrong that day I was only excited happy and laughing that day was so nice also.many school came and compet with my school in many game and we won them

What lesson(s) did you learn from that worst/best day experience

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for my worst day

  • know the kind of friend you associate with
  • do not trust anyone
  • be careful and wise
  • not everyone should be your friend
  • when eating with others/or in public be carefulul and wise

for my best day

  • try to participate in any school activity
  • engage yourself in any sports activity because it helps in body building

Conclusion

I really appreciate your efforts for reading this and am also looking forward to join more contests and also win I will also like to invite @graceani @chukwu10 and also @deben
my regards to @steemalive
@ngoenyi
@chichieze
@ijelady
@samuel20
@focusnow

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It is indeed painful when we lose people who are so dear to us but there are things we just need to accept in this life.

Greetings friend.

 2 years ago 

yeah that's true thanks I really appreciate

You are welcome

 2 years ago (edited)

@richy10, your story is heart touching!

What a tragedy! Loosing a dear father in a twinkle of an eye. Too bad. What about those his friends? Didn't you recognize any?

In all, take heart. Also learn from your father's mistake. Don't trust mortals. Food poison is real.

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 2 years ago 

I only recognize one but he is also died loosing someone you so much love is not so easy to forget I really miss him still date😭😭😭😭😭😭

 2 years ago 

What a painful death. Oh! He died very young just at his early 40's. Bad and envy friends of your father sent him to early grave. Sorry my brother, they will all go there. Take heart and don't cry again okay. Hope you are doing great with your mom and other siblings?

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 2 years ago 

yeah it is so painful those his friends will never go on punish whenever I remember this I really feel like killing my self but never the less I know that God is thegreatest

 2 years ago 

Please don't kill yourself. If you do, you might kill your mother which will result making the whole family to suffer. Please, bear the great lost and may God continue to console you and your family members. Cheers

 2 years ago 

Amen thanks for your the console you are really a good adviceser thank you so much

 2 years ago 

Why using #all4one and #answer as tag???

Remove those tags and replace with #creativewriting #writing

 2 years ago 

thanks you sir I really appreciate and also I have take my correction

What a sad experience, the demise of a parent is always a heavy pain in the heart, it good to know that you had dun in your inter house sport

Good luck

 2 years ago 

thanks for you console friend

You are welcome

 2 years ago 

I appreciate

You are welcome

 2 years ago 

So sorry for the lost to death, God has promised us tha soon death will be no more.

 2 years ago 

thanks I really appreciate

Sorry about the loss of your father.

Inter house sports was one of exciting things about secondary school

 2 years ago 

yeah it is really a nice day

 2 years ago 

Oh dear @richy20 I felt so bad after learning how your father passed on.He was killed by poison.Human being is very wicked and I am sure you have learnt to be careful with people and never to trust anyone you see.

Your best day which was the Interhouse sports day was indeed a memorable day.I have always been associated with the yellow house and I was happy seeing them taking pictures with a trophy.

 2 years ago 

yeah the day was so nice and interesting I really can forget all we did that day

Hmm😢, friends. That’s why people say we know a lot of people but not all of them are our friends. Your friends are you friends when you have nothing but immediately you start making it , they start passing bad comments and they start feeling jealous. A friend who will go to the extent of poisoning you because of what you have is too wicked to a called a friend.

That’s why our parents always tell us not to trust anyone with our food, not even our friends.

try to participate in any school activity

This is what I keep on telling people you know. School activities are part of school and you can’t go to school and only concentrate on academics, after completing the school you will regret. It’s always best to do a little of everything.

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 2 years ago 

am really grateful for this I promise to keep publishing for interesting and educative post am really happy for this

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