ALL4ONE PROWRIT-W7 WRITING CONTEST!!!Topic 1: My dreams for a better world by @richy20

in SteemAlive2 years ago (edited)

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hello belove friends indeed this week was too hard on me I have not been participating in this contest very well and also in the platform at large guys I was really not feeling fine and indeed very very sick but for now am back and fully back in steemalive nothing will stop me now I will love to invite @chichieze @chukwu @innocent10 to join us in this contest am here to discuss many things about our country mostly this conversation may be centered on our bad leaders today Topic 1: My dreams for a better world and also many things that you all will benefit from this will be very interesting bet me

problems seen in the world and how you want things to change to make our world better.

  • UNEMPLOYMENT
    here is this definitely seen in many ways but for me I considered this as the cause from our leader both president governor and many of them our youths today are doing all source of unreasonable act because of difficult things made by our leaders. this is a suituation whereby someone especially youths looking for work but can not be employed due to the poor suituation and corrupt leaders this need to be changed so as to stop many crimes like killing of human parts for sell, stealing and killing people just for money. this is cause mainly because of unemployment in the country and it is been done by the youths of nowdays.
  • INSECURITIES
    insecurity in the country has loose many lifes in this days look Nigeria now in hearing closer you will see that many people has lost their lives because of insecurity in the country. our leaders are busy for them themselves forgetting those who put them on power. in Nigeria now there is no security at all the country is wide open for stranger to eat up all the citizens the military are not give nuclear weapons to equip them fight our enemies am not blaming them am just blaming those in power and also about 100000 people have been killed in our country and nothing have been done about it all this is because of insecurity in the country we all should at least join hands together to tell this people that Nigeria is open like tropical island abeg 😪🤐
  • poor education
    this is the worst part that I have ever seen since i was born it this Earth surface this country really have poor education system and this pain me that more children's are not properly teach and also teachers are not even intelligent and brilliant, how can a teacher who have not even been property educated teach others I wonder oooo this is the problem this coutry is facing and need to be check also this is effecting our children's who are not teached well/properly in school children are the future of a state contry or nation now if children's are not properly trained up by giving them a proper education system how can the country survive this is really killing the future of many students and also the country at large
  • corrupt leaders
    Nigeria is died at large because of corrupt leader who are busy for themselves who have no care about we the citizen. corrupt leader are people who rule a land with thuggery rigging and have to care about it's country when we talk about corrupt leaders has made things more difficult and also has made more people to lost there life because of certain problems, it is said that learders are to lead by example and not allowing it's rule to cry suffer and also almost die before he or she find something of eat in the country this is not course by citizens they are only cause by leaders who have no care for it's country

how I want things to change to make our world better.

there are many things that should be place in the best place and things will turn forgood in a certain country and state I have millions of them but I will like to talk about only few

  • there should be peace and harmony in a country this is a first step
  • there should be a well characterized citizen with understanding
  • there should be a good leader
  • there should be help for the citizens when the ask for it
  • there should be a well build hospital everywhere for citizen and I believe this will reduce stress death
  • there should be a well trained security guilding the country with more equip nuclear weapons to fight their enemies
  • there should be the good economy
  • there should be good roads and gutters.
  • there should be employment opportunity for youths especially
  • there should be provision of good and quality school for children and youth for the betterment of the country
  • and so on

Conclusion

hello friend @richy20 is back I promise to do better in the nest week contest I hope you all really saw how our leaders are killing us indeed things need to be changed in the country thanks for reading I really appreciate I will love to invite @ogwo @precious123 @emmanu @chichieze @samuel20 to go through this post
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 2 years ago 

My dear, we're all tired of the way things are actually going on in this world...... People wonder, will things ever get better??
Dm for a bible based answer

 2 years ago 

me too am very tried of this world this are very hard and too difficult for people I wish that God will hear the crys of innocent souls and also come to their rescue

 2 years ago 

Don't worry dear, everything will happen so soon that you'll be shocked, just wait for the miracle

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 2 years ago 

there should be a well build hospital everywhere for citizen and I believe this will reduce stress death.

As long as this system of things exist. Nothing human government will do that will bring a better world. Only God's kingdom can.

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The truth is that , this country most especially is being not only our leaders who are corrupts . But we have great deal of poor mental oriented citizens , who are quite very corrupt on their own circles . Changes needs to be both upstroke and downstroke , stropping to ochestrate all concerned citizen and leaders to have such a mental shift mainly wired for meaningful evolvement.

 2 years ago 

Everyone loves and dreams for a world filled with peace not an unemployment life, hunger, bad government and many more, but do you think human government can bring lasting solution to this problems in general?

Thank God you are back. Please keep participating. It help develop yourself and we will benefit from you. Keep it up.

I'm happy that you are back. Insecurity is getting out of hand in this country is only God tha protect his people. As for me I see's it as end time.

I'm happy that you are back. Insecurity is getting out of hand in this country is only God tha protect his people. As for me I see's it as end time.

The rate of unemployment and insecurity in Nigeria is becoming another thing, even the securities needs security as well.

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