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RE: Diary game Of My Day//How My Day Went//All4one,100%To Steemalive On 23/02/2022.Club5050 .
You had a good day but I must comment that in the first paragraph there was no full stop. The story kept going and going by the use of conjunction. I would suggest better improvement on that. Overall, your day was good.