An Event

in Freewriters2 years ago (edited)

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What I see is the chaos I don't want to be.
Is it anxiety that makes me run or are there too many people in a place like this? Tents, tents and more tents and also just roofs. I won't stay here and the air castle promises nothing good. Screaming, crying children waiting for their turn a turn that will never arrive if I see how many tents are placed on that field.
What I feel is there's something planned. A festival? I doubt it because there's no room to walk, dance or celebrate. It doesn't look like an outdoor event either. I wonder what is the reason for those white roofs. Protection against rain or the sun? Let's hope Ronald McDonald won't spook around and lure the kids away with a balloon.


It's a beautiful day and as always we stay home. Bored on the couch we watch the news on TV.
Look, says John, there's a festival nearby, shall we go and have a look? Look at all those people. He stands up enthusiastically and points at the screen.
Keep your hands off, I shout, away with those fingers or you'll break another television.
Come on, he says cheerfully, here's your coat. In single file we head for the grounds on the other side of the village.
The parking lot is empty and there's not a soul to be seen. The inflatable castle looks deserted.
Are we too early, I ask in surprise.
John shrugs his shoulders and looks around.
Crazy, he says, how come there's not a soul around in such a short time?
Before I can answer, a net falls over us and we're dragged away. I vaguely hear a voice saying: Some more savages cleared away. What a stupid people these villagers are, they come to this camp like ants to honey.



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El caos, la ansiedad y niños sollozos e impacientes me transmiten la sensación de no querer estar allí entre tantas tiendas y personas. Las conjeturas que planteas del lugar comienzan a minar mi interés en tu historia.

El aburrimiento en la TV los hizo presa fácil del engaño tras una noticia falsa de un festival en el pueblo. Es una situación que me hizo reir, porque se fueron todos en fila india al festival que nunca fue.

Me dejaste intrigado con el final de tu historia.

¿Continuará, los secuestraron o se trata solo de una broma familiar?

Tal vez John hubiese deseado estar en un festival hippie tan famoso como el que comparto en este microvídeo.



¡Saludos y buena suerte!

#wewrite

 2 years ago 

It sounds as if the villagers are deleted from the scenery

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Cualquier teoría es válida en esta historia.

Saludos y feliz día.

Upvoted! Thank you for supporting witness @jswit.

Saludos, amiga @xiao-aine:

Pudiéramos pensar, de acuerdo con lo que leemos en su relato, que las imágenes en la televisión son una farsa para atraer incautos, que se trata de un montaje con seres que realizan su papel en el escenario y luego desaparecen... Cualquier conjetura es válida, ya que ese final deja al lector en libertad de forjarse las explicaciones que más le convengan... Bien hecho. Éxitos...

#wewrite

 2 years ago 

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