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Great story! Probably my favorite of the week.

Brilliant! Love how you tell us she's a cuckold (I think that is the case) by the way she jumps at the black widow role, the way Max says 'you're it' when he first sees her, and the parallel between playing a character who castrates a man and then, irl, divorcing B. You set it up to imply she cheated on him (I think), without telling us. A great flash fiction.

LOL, 'cannot confirm or deny'. I've been using freewrites lately to practice reading in a more focused way, to notice what other writers are up to in the hopes of learning from them and using that practiced focused on my own fiction. From your work, I would assume that you are thinking about, or have studied, fiction as a craft, that you're consciously aware of the technical aspects of storytelling. What's your background? Have you spent a lot of time in creative writing classes?

Interesting. I have a similar experience, in that I took many classes without graduating. I've also studied fiction with Gotham Writers Workshop and through my own reading. I think I've learned more about fiction outside of traditional universities than inside.

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