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RE: CONTEST: Tell us About a Favorite Freewrite and Win - 7/6/2021

in Freewriters3 years ago

My favourite Freewrite for this week The Unforgiving by @ezun1!😍

The writer is so creative that he won my heart as I was reading and was thinking about my life too🤩. His last lines hit hard....I quote;

As days went by,
Situations were the same,
Who then shall save me from this self imprisonment?
Who else could save me but myself?
A prisoner in his self made prison.-@ezun1

I feel the writer is talking to the unforgiving hearts. He thought his time to narrate how it is when we are unforgiving; just as the last line says; "a prisoner in his self made prison". Why should we bother our own self carrying people in our hearts in the name of "not going to forgive him"?

Let us learn to forgive and free ourselves from self made prisons!

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