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RE: Virus Schmyerus, a Nonsensical Freewrite
OMG the salamander - me too!!!
yes there are such things
I just read about it on steem
salamanders that do not move
ever
they have what they need
I want to be a salamander
Brilliant!
This is a 5-minute freewrite? I love all the surprises: the minions have broken toes and
nevermore will I trust
a tree frog’s ideas
OMG that cracks me up - it reminds me in a way of a song I love, Whispering Grass, by The Inkspots,
Why do you whisper, green grass
Why tell the tress what ain't so
Whispering grass, the trees don't have to know, no, no
Your closing lines are fantastic!
how many snakes are
under my porch
conspiring
“which one of us will get to go
scare the pants off of her today?”
I'm glad you pay no heed to those who say there are no freewrites worth reading.
Their loss - our gain! Thank you for sharing this!
It's really hard to stay the path of nonsense, and those lines make way more sense than I was trying to make! Try it if you haven't. I think themostdangerouswriting app helped me do it. You write, or you die.
I anthropomorphized I see today. I wonder if I'll do that again. Gonna go try soon.