Nice song! An advise: Use the full range of tags (e.g. with steempeak.com or peakd.com you can use 10 tags), why not #music or regional or language tags? That would increase your visibility!
And add some background about the song and about the artists.
And finally: Put them on Hive, e.g. peakd.com, there is in the meantime more interaction than on Steem.
Again, just recommendations.