RE: The Diary Game || 15 June 2024 || Went to ATM booth with elder brother to withdraw money and had a nice moment later today.
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You wrote this:
I woke up first thing this morning. My mother called me to wake up. I was able to wake up very quickly. I love waking up in the morning. Then after waking up
Five short sentences and you used each time "waking up". Five times is too much. On the other hand here I am to give you some writing tips.
Write as if you talk to a friend and do not repeat yourself. Read back what you wrote! Does it make sense?
If you love waking up in the morning I wonder why had your mother to wake you up?
Be creative and try to write in an interesting way. Your photos are good so all you have to do is edit a bit if it comes to your words.
I wish you a great day & good luck!
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