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RE: Contest:- A Mistake I Made and What I Have Learned Mistake I Made and What I Have Learned
Hi @dazzle55 that was risky! Thank goodness you were not hurt by the villagers, it is always good to obey the rules because it saves us from trouble and aches.
Always split your paragraphs into 7-10 lines. Yours were too long.
Okay ma
I take the correction