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RE: The Diary Game Season 3, Better Life, Sabtu, 20 Maret 2021
Nice diary
but,
all happened on Saturday (March 20, 2021). You posted on Sunday (March 21, 2021). Most logic if you use "yesterday" rather than "today" diction for this context
Terimakasih sarannya. Maklum saya masih belajar. 😊