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RE: Fighting For Their King's Freedom
Wars between two camps, humans and animals, are always because of human selfishness.
If animals could talk... I'm sure humans would be silenced by them.
I was so touched when the lion shed tears, I know very well how when we lose hope, Suddenly a glimmer of light comes and helps us...
This story looks real, animals just want to live safely, while humans want to live in luxury. Let's introspect ourselves and don't let us become greedy people...
Good luck, friends, for this challenge.... Keep up the spirit! ☺
Yes these animals wars with human beings is always cause by our own selfishness, most times the white will want to perform an unnecessary experiment that will definitely cause harm to the animals and this is unfair.
The Lion was so sad and helpless even when he was seeing the Eagle everyday. He didn't also believe that his people will be able to come to his rescue, he just forgot about that idea and waited till his time of death incase he dies in the process of the experiment.
I used to write alot of storybooks before I joined steemit 🤭. The story took me up to 2 hours before I could analyse it, though I was doing other things while analyzing it. Thanks for commenting.
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Owh wawww...
This is why this writing course is very important for a writer...
Maybe you can continue to the next round, I would love to read those stories...
Maybe I will tell them to the kids too... 😁
This is my post on task 2,
https://steemit.com/hive-169911/@liasteem/the-friendship-of-squirrel-and-bear
Definitely ma, the writing course has also taught me alot, am improving because of it and am happy about that.
Yeah I won't hesitate to continue to the next round, I will keep on trying my best. The title of your fable looks good, I will check it out tonight.
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Am excited about this, thank you so much.