A nice and touching message. I'm glad you wrote it in the #freewrite format. It is quite unusual for me to watch how a young man feeds his grandmother. It is very sweet and touching. In our culture, grandmothers would resist very much because they want to feel independent and self-sufficient to the last. In addition, in our traditions, men very rarely engage in such care, especially when there are other women around.

Regarding the good - you wrote everything very well, there is nothing to add)))

Thank you for participating in this contest.