Hi! @patudoh, You have copied 45% text from this linklink. It is not right to copy other's content. Try writing your own post. It will be good for you. You can only take ideas from others' content. But other's content cannot be completely copied. I hope you understand.
The second image in your post is not copyright free. Please use copyright free image. Second Image Source
If you want you can use copyright-free images in your post which is completely free. Hope you don't do this kind of work anymore. Some free image site link below:
https://pixabay.com/
https://www.pexels.com/
https://unsplash.com/
Okay thanks