U wrote so well.
Just some little suggestions
1.Use footer at the end of each paragraphy it will make ur post more presentable.
2.use that picture of which u talked about above.U
Said

Then I made tea for myself.Here I am showing the tea made by me.
But u didnot upload tea photo but a flower' photo.And the picture of the tea is uploaded where u did not mention it.

3.Drop ur achievement 1 post link at the end of the post