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RE: Better life | Dairy game | Shopping in mart for grocery and iftari with friends | 19/04 /2022
Your narration is good and very well story write but you know what it can be more beautiful and effective if you separate each part of your diary with community border pic which you used at the end of you post.
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Ok I will thank u for your suggestion ☺️