Story Review by dinaks44

in CampusConnect2 years ago

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In the eye of the storm

Chapter 3


Plot:

You really need to read this novel is not normal. The writer (rob thier) has an imagery writing I would say, the words put at the right time and no mistake in the writing. The paragraphs of the event and the events are very well accepted.


Setting:

The time of thoughts of this chapter isn’t the type you often see in other novels. This is more than romance or action, he made this particular character like reality. In which u picture yourself doing it.


Characterization:

Lilly’s character was made to be rude in this episode, she was more of a nuisance to mr Ambrose as the normal way I knew it. Mr Ambrose on the other hand is cold and gives a very silent treatment which is very disturbing.


Play:

This continues where Lilly goes into the room, and sees a young man lying on the bed facing the other side. As she bring his attention to her side, the writer made it known to us that joy filled her heart on seeing mr Ambrose . He didn’t look he just wanted to know what who ever it was wanted that he had no time and he replied she knew. He was surprised due to the words he said. And all they did was to stare at each other till, Lilly took the first step and sat on the bed and held his hands, he questioned her what she was doing and he replied “holding your hands”. He reminded her that he was her employer and they shouldn’t be having this type of contact. Not the way you guys will think, he said it in an ordering manner and she told him shut up reminding him of the kiss they had in the boat that wrecked. All he wanted was to get out of the bed and house and get on the move again back to Britain. The woman taking care of him took his hand watch and he requested Lilly to get it from her because he had lost track of time. He took newspaper to read to avoid being the idle. Lilly on requesting for it was told she took it from because he checks the time every 2 mins and Lilly noticed the woman fixed the watch and also took it to the local watch man in the village. When Lilly returned MR Ambrose was furious due to fact he was on the news, Lilly disgraced him in public on the fight for woman’s rights. Women weren’t allowed to vote or work they just stayed as house wives well Lilly was against that so during the occasion she went against her employer thereby disgracing him which made the media to think that mr Ambrose can’t control his secretary talk more of him can he control himself. So they didn’t talk to each other till they reached the her house when he dropped her off with his cart. Then zoomed off without saying goodbye. It’s been 1 week since Lilly left the house and she had to face her aunt and that she wasn’t prepared for and costing her to lie as usual. In The next chapter we will see if she will be punished or not.

I also reviewed chapter 1 and 2 here
Chapter1
chapter2

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 2 years ago 

Amazing review by you, truly the book is a must read, and it's descriptive in nature, one can easily visualize everything. Thanks for sharing, hope to read more of you! Help our community grow by always setting some percentage reward for campusconnectng. Thank you!

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 2 years ago 

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