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RE: My Local New | District: North Aceh - Syamtalira Bayu City | The scarcity of cooking oil has an impact on street vendors.
Thank you for taking part in the My Local News challenge.
Potentially an interesting article, helped by the interviews.
However you fail to explore what is actually causing the scarcity of the oil, and your writing style is very weak.
thank you sir @pennsif I will fix everything in my local news. I will also do the next interview, with your comments it will motivate me.