First of all, thank you for participating in this quality contest.

You have nicely defined the definition of success by dividing it into two parts. Very good but as a suggestion I would like to tell you that it would look best if you make a paragraph with a gap of three to four lines or five lines in a row.

The mark down was pretty good. Hope you continue to create this beauty, it will increase the quality of your writing and the beauty of viewing. Also, be sure to take note of the tips the moderator has given you. The message you give to your friends to succeed is really great. Best wishes for you. (thank you)