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already repaired.
A tight hug for you my friend

Awesome thank you

But still no open ending, an open ending means, the story could be continued

@Muftii the deadline is in 5 hours, there is still no open ending. You added more words and gave important advice at the end, but that closed the story. Please change it to have an open ending that would allow the reader to wonder how it would continue.

Otherwise i cannot count this as valid entry >_<

the purpose of open endings is not a story can be understood by the reader, who can open his insight / inspiration as a result of the story being read.
or maybe a serialized story that you meant ... ??

 4 years ago (edited)

An open end put simply means the story can be continued.

I'm sorry @Muftii, you put so much effort into it, but sadly it violates the rule of an open end... :(

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