Sing and Play ~ Week #136 → My entry: [ORIGINAL SONG] "Me haces falta" | Acoustic performance by @alejandrop

in Dance and music show3 years ago


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Buenas noches querida comunidad de #DanceAndMusic.

Esta oportunidad les traigo algo diferente a lo que habitualmente he venido presentado a ustedes desde que empecé en esta plataforma de #steemit. Hoy no será un cover, sino, una canción PROPIA que salió de lo más profundo de mis sentimientos en aquel entonces. La razón por la que no subo temas propios tiene dos motivos: Uno y el principal, que para mí se me hace aún muy difícil componer letras a alguna melodía, ya que melodías tengo muchas, pero sin letras aún por nacer, y el segundo motivo es que, como tengo muy poquititos temas compuestos, sólo los guardo para mostrarlo a ustedes en ocasiones muy especiales, y como nunca he subido un tema propio, pues mi oportunidad de cantarles el primero de todos, y el primero en mi vida musical de por sí, "Me haces falta".

Good evening dear #DanceAndMusic community.

This opportunity I bring you something different from what I have usually been presenting to you since I started on this #steemit platform. Today will not be a cover, but an OWN song that came out of the depths of my feelings at that time. The reason why I don't upload my own songs has two reasons: One and the main one, which for me is still very difficult to compose lyrics to any melody, since I have many melodies, but no lyrics yet to be born, and the second reason is that, as I have very few songs composed, I only save them to show you on very special occasions, and since I have never uploaded a song of my own, because my opportunity to sing you the first of all, and the first in my musical life of by yes, "I need you".



♦ Historia de la canción // Song's history ♦



Era una tarde es esos días en que uno siente que las cosas se vienen abajo porque crees que el universo conspira en contra tuya, y fue entonces que me acordé de todos esos amoríos que nunca resultaron o los que casi llegaron a quedar permanentes, y entre tanta palabrería, pensar, cantar y tocar, nace la canción "Me haces falta", la cual ha pasado por muchísimas modificaciones, tanto en la letra como en varias partes de la melodía y el ritmo, y aunque aún pienso que no está concluída, siento que así como está da a entender el mensaje: Qué falta me hacen todas esas caricias, las veces que me decías que me querías y todo ese amor que me dabas, todas estas tardes de calor que se volvieron frías y agradables porque tú estabas conmigo, y todas las veces que te decía te amo desde el corazón, de tu sonrisa como respuesta a esas palabras, todo me hace falta de ti.

It was an afternoon in those days when you feel that things are falling apart because you believe that the universe conspires against you, and it was then that I remembered all those love affairs that never worked or those that almost became permanent, and between so much talk, thinking, singing and playing, the song "Me haces falta" was born, which has undergone many modifications, both in the lyrics and in various parts of the melody and rhythm, and although I still think that it is not finished, I feel that the way it is, the message implies: What do I need all those caresses, the times you told me that you loved me and all that love you gave me, all these hot afternoons that became cold and pleasant because you were with me , and all the times that I said I love you from the heart, from your smile in response to those words, I need everything from you.


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Sin más preámbulos, con ustedes les dejo mi entrada para la semana #136 con concurso Sing & Play, creado y organizado por nuestro hermano y compañero musical @donatello, que amablemente nos permitió entrar a la comunidad a todos nosotros a compartir un pedacito de cada quién. Espero les sea de su agrado y nos vemos en la próxima oportunidad, y se me cuidan amigos. Hasta pronto.
Without further ado, with you I leave my entry for week # 136 with the Sing & Play contest, created and organized by our brother and musical partner @donatello, who kindly allowed all of us to enter the community to share a piece of each who. I hope you like it and see you next time, and friends take care of me. See you soon.


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Tu mirada, se viene hacia a mí
Y el tiempo se detiene aquí
Y la brisa se torna fría
Por tu presencia ese día
Vive de los sueños
Vive por siempre en mí
Y la sonrisa de tu cara
Me ilumina mi alma

Como esperarte a ti, amor mío
Sembrar mi semilla de amor
en tu pecho, en tu pecho...

Y me quedo aquí
Esperando por ti
Pensando cada segundo,
Anhelándote cada minuto.

Y me quedo aquí
Esperando por ti
Y la ausencia de tus brazos
Me desprenden en pedazos

Así..

Hay un gran camino por recorrer
Y ahora me toca sin ti esta vez
Me hace tanta falta tus caricias
Y la voz que "te quiero" me decía

Como esperarte a ti, amor mío
Sembrar mi semilla de amor
en tu pecho, en tu pecho...

Y me quedo aquí
Esperando por ti
Pensando cada segundo,
Anhelándote cada minuto.

Ohh.. ohhh...

Y me quedo aquí
Esperando por ti
Pensando cada segundo,
Anhelándote cada minuto.

Y me quedo aquí
Esperando por ti
Y la ausencia de tus brazos
Me desprenden en pedazos


♦ English Translations ♦



Your gaze, it comes to me
And time stops here
And the breeze turns cold
For your presence that day
Live on dreams
Live forever in me
And the smile on your face
My soul enlightens me

How to wait for you, my love
Sow my seed of love
on your chest, on your chest ...

And i stay here
Waiting for you
Thinking every second,
Yearning for you every minute.

And i stay here
Waiting for you
And the absence of your arms
Tear me apart

A) Yes..

There is a long way to go
And now it's my turn without you this time
I need your caresses so much
And the voice that "I love you" told me

How to wait for you, my love
Sow my seed of love
on your chest, on your chest ...

And i stay here
Waiting for you
Thinking every second,
Yearning for you every minute.

Ohh .. ohhh ...

And i stay here
Waiting for you
Thinking every second,
Yearning for you every minute.

And i stay here
Waiting for you
And the absence of your arms
Tear me apart



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Mi pequeña bebé estrenando nueva pijama para dormir, gracias a #steemit.

My little baby wearing new pajamas to sleep in, thanks to #steemit.


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Thanks ever for all support!!!




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 3 years ago 

This is an amazing song my friend. Both lyrically and musically.
"en tu pecho, en tu pecho..." the major- minor transition here is the best part of the composition for me.
Your song sounds a lot like an Italian pop hit, especially the chorus but the Spanish text makes it unique
And you`re a great musician. I love your voice and guitar skills.
All this song needs to become a hit is a studio recording.
BrAVO!

Ohhhhhh... its a honor read your words my friend, seriously. This was my first composition in my life... but my inspiration i dont know where has gone because i composed only 3 songs and no more... The lyrics don't comes... jaja The melodies are in, but not lyrics yet. I was looking a Lyric for your new contest but i'm zero jaja.. My brain was burned thinking in a lyric for your song.

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