Steemit Engagement Challenge (week 2): The Forest My Rescue Ground
Hello Friends
It's my privilege to join in this Engagement Challenge for this second week, As a steemian engagement is one of the core factors to help one grow. I consider this a good approach to settle that.
*Now, the story I am about to write is about a poor family who lost their future ambition due to war.
A young boy finds the forest to be the only safe place for him after losing all his family members and as such the forest became a Rescue Ground For him., find out why this was so
Before this terribly hard time of violence and war had begun in my country Here in Africa, Mandy my Elder brother use to tell me that we would travel to Iceland and live a good life there. In a country devoid of corruption and other vices, his voice was high-pitched and full of hope, I wonder where his motivations were from, but I strongly believe and rely on him. After saying that, he had sung with so much glee in his heart, that it made me smile.
I jumped around the neighborhood, telling my friends that I would be traveling oversea very soon, silly me. They all gathered around me and I told them all I knew, every bit, even some fabricated ones too because I was so optimistic about traveling.
Preye, the bully had walked out in anger to confront his parents. He was the one who came back with the true story, he sneered at me and stuck his tongue out. Nevertheless, my friends consoled me.
It's been seven months since the war started, I want to go back to my other country. They say that the fight is for the new country so that we become free. But I often wonder, why fight to gain freedom? why the killing?
I have been hiding here for hours, in this Forest. The creatures I used to hunt a few months ago are now my companions. All for want of freedom, I have taken my place among the Creatures in the forest. I look around me, hoping to see anyone I know. No one is in sight yet, not even my elder brother, but the bombs are still dropping.
The bombs themselves are fascinating. It drops and takes many lives away, it took Brendan’s arms two months ago, and it took papa too. It comes with a loud noise that shakes the ground and leaves the entire community wailing. Why use tear gas, bombs, and guns when they know it destroys? what happened to dialogue and resolutions?
Mandy told me that the old country failed, they turned their backs on the agreements they had made. My brother now cries every day, He no longer plays his guitar and sings redemption songs by Bob Marley of Jamaica.
He had begun crying when his girlfriend, Nse was raped. She was brutally assaulted by four soldiers, that night, she cried and cursed aloud, unfortunately, she died. Her father was too ashamed, so he went out, he never came back, there was an air raid and the bombs took him.
Since this war had begun, we have not eaten two square meals. Before the war, My Elder brother who serves as my parent had been a Shoemaker, I do help him with some shoe-making services.
Now, we have no shops because our shops were destroyed by bombs, My parents were dead leaving only me and my brother.
A month into the war, I was always worried about my empty and rumbling stomach, I always cried myself to sleep. Once I had taken Preye's mother's roasted yam, I had been ashamed.
So ashamed that I couldn't talk to anyone. But now, I have taken so many things, I now wear that shame with pride, I have no other option.
The people and soldiers say we are in a new country, but, I doubt that. What new country cannot save herself from the destruction imposed on her? We have the flag and names, but we are still the old people. Maybe we are trying to run away from our scars and fears.
Once, I questioned Mandy about this country we are in right now, she replied that I was just a child. Being a child did not exempt me from the suffering, no it did not.
Even though I was just a child, the soldiers came to take me away. They said they needed men, but I was just a child. Mandy had covered me in our water drum, they had almost caught me.
They took my friends, I watched them cry as they were dragged away to be conscripted into the army. Preye would have been taken too, but he was without arms and so he sat there in his father's chair, crying bitterly as he watched the soldiers. After that incident, we had become close friends.
Maybe the war had benefits. The war had made me realize that Preye was a good person, he was only insecure and had to bully others to hide his fears. Preye's father had died too, during the war.
He and his mother were chased out of his late father's house by his uncles. This happened because Preye's mother refused to become a second wife to his oldest uncle, this is one sad tradition we have in my country.
My brother is now a living shadow, he barely talks, he just stares into the open and cries till he's tired. he never tries to ‘take cover, as the army men say, wonder why the army didn’t take him to join them, maybe the owner of the mother earth just knew that I needed to be taken care of and I had no one, apart from my brother.
The bombs don't even care about him, they never go in his direction. Once, there had been a rumor that he used charms to protect himself, so many came around him whenever the bombs were heard. I could not cope with him anymore, sometimes I was afraid of him.
I think today's air raid is over, I can hear the wailings that are building up. Tears begin to fall from my eyes, I let them flow freely. After crying, I decide to stay in the forest until it's dark, then I will go home when the bomb blasts have reduced, check on my Neighbors who were aged women, and also my elder brother. He likes me to stay in the forest because he never wanted the Soldiers to harm me.
As I step into my compound, I see a large crowd, everyone is crying. My heart begins to pound.
“Take heart, Idatesit, take heart. Your brother is gone", One of my Neighbors says to me.
My knees become weak and I give in. The old women try to hold me as I crash. My brother has gone, I cried out.
My brother committed suicide because he couldn’t get his mind off his girlfriend who was rapped and killed and he did nothing to save her.
As we were crying over my brother’s death, the soldiers began to drop bombs in this late hour, the women asked me to run to the forest again so as to remain alive.
That was the last time I saw our house because since then, the bomb didn’t stop dropping, it was the main war. And since then the forest became my rescue ground.
I came to appreciate nature and I say to myself that mother earth has a lot to offer than thinking about war. Dialogue would have solved these tough times more than war. But since the people don’t want to choose dialogue, let me remain in the Forest my rescue ground.
Ideally, the war would have been avoided if there was a dialogue between the main country and some sections of the country who claimed to fight for Revolution, dialogue can bring a lot of good things.
Why do people tends to forget this when two bodies are already warming up for a war?
why do people tends to forget the future of children when the initiate war?
why not Nogotiate instead of Using Force?
Just like the forest is peaceful, we all need peace!!!
It wouldn't be nice if i didn't invite few of my friends like @eliany, @patjewell, @olesia, @juichi, @strecoza and @janemorane to participate in this Contest. Let me know your thoughts about this.
War is never good at all. It affects both the rich and the poor, although some gain for their selfish interest. Nothing can be compared to peace. When we live peacefully, life would seem like eternity.
Exactly!
Ofcourse war affect alot , both young and old even rich and poor just like you mentioned.
And yeah, nothing can be compared to peace, thats the way forward, and this can sometimes be achieve through dialogue.
Thank you very much for your meaningful contribution.😊, hope you have writen your own story, because i will like to read.
You are welcome. This my entry link.
https://steemit.com/hive-113376/@benton3/steemit-engagement-contest-by-colombia-original-or-or-cafe-terrace-at-night-all-that-glitters-is-not-gold-by-benton3
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Dialogue and negotiation would have done more good to humanity. War is never the solution and can never be. I wish we can just do away with this bloodsucking and devastating act and embrace dialogue and negotiation in ironing out our differences. Thanks for sharing this very wonderful piece.
Exactly, if people could actually count the cost os lost in a war and after a war, i dont think anybody will want to start it.
Dialogue and negotiation can do more good than reponding to the way we feel hurt.
Thank you bro, i'm glad we can all learn from this work of art😊.
You did a good job. Writing is really in your blood...Smile. I covet grace😀
I am learning bro😊 and i am still growing, i won't stop till i get to were i am going, thank you very much.
What a tragic tale🥺🥺! It felt like you were describing what we are going through here in our country. But unlike the narrator, we cannot hide in the forests.
As civilians caught in between a war the soldiers are fighting against what has now been termed “amba boys”, the forests and bushes have now become the scariest place instead of a refuge.
All those who are are kidnapped, killed and even raped all happen in the bushes and forests. Nobody wants to live near such areas because they are rather the unsafest places
Nothing good can come out from war. The evil which is carried out in that period can never be cancelled out. War should rather be avoided at all costs.😭💔💔
I'm so sorry to hear this my friend, without mentioning the place, i already know it.
Well, i wish many people come to this terms that war isnt the answer.
Humans lose alot when war happens but gain alot when there is peace.
I hope you stay safe over there while waiting for a better time, because it will come.
Thank you for your contribution to my work of art😊.
Thank you @ubongudofot. We continue to pray for peace.
War is never good in any way.
Thanks for this creativity
A writing that touches my heart @ubongudofot, war only brings misery and pain.
This story is sad and even worse is the reality of many families in countries at war.
Let's hope people stop being so lazy with others.
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Thank you very much @nahela, ofcourse war brings misery and as such not good for anyone.
We all hope for a better future. Thank you.
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Oh my word! Why I ever allowed myself to get so deep into your story I don’t know. You have moved me!
People and what they stand for plays a vital importance in my life. Why… why… why?
Will we ever have answers? Nope
In the end… we are all just humans
Great job!
Thank you very much😊 for going through this piece of art 😊.
Trust me, after writing this , i read it again and i was trying to imagine it. I shed tears. There is no need for war, we have lost alot as a result of war.
Thank you so much.
Thank you very much for this educative fiction writing, I really enjoyed reading.
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One of the things I don't want to experience in this life is war! It's never a solution for any dispute, instead much casualties and unrest, thanks for the forest. The lesson here is that we should try to be peaceable with everyone no matter what, thanks for sharing your fictional story with us!
In times of war and civil unrest, the forest is usually a place of hideout. My parents used to tell me the stories of how they escaped death as a result of taking refuse in the forest. I can not help by thank the Most High God for creating the forest.
I agree with you. But who will be ready to go into negotiation? We wouldn't have had wars in the past and even now, Ono one is still ready for that and that's why we still witness wars. The story is so touching. I wish everywhere will be as peaceful as the forest. Thanks for sharing
This is rather more encouraging and kind words thank you very much Ma.
Indeed the forest is a place of hideout. No one is comfortable with war, due to how lives are lost. Everybody need peace.
I'm glad this work of art could pass such a strong message😊.
War is destructive to mother earth because it kills every living thing without pity. This story is sad and I couldn't help but imagine every scene in my head and wonder why people won't settle for dialogue instead of war
Keep staying in the forest until they decide to think properly.
Best wishes in the contest