STEEMIT ENGAGEMENT CONTEST BY COLOMBIA ORIGINAL||Cafe terrace at night - all that Glitters is not Gold BY @benton3

in Colombia-Original2 years ago

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It was a very quiet city or so it seemed to the Jones family, they usually drive to the Acres city in Missiouri USA. It was a very cool place and they had a beautiful cafe ( Eye-Catching) at the beginning of the street where they use to have a good time. You will see couples dancing, children playing, lights on the street till dawn. It was a place everyone dreams to be. It seems everything about is PEEFECT

The entire family loves the environment and they pressured the father to get a house there. So Jones and the wife was just waiting to make some extra bucks in order to get a house in their dream city.

Having made some extra money enough to get a modest apartment, he went out in search of an apartment. Mr Jones and the wife were very fortunate to get an apartment not just in the cafe street but very close to the cafe. The children were very excited that soonest, they will be moving to the place of their dream.

All of their friends had always wanted to be there but they couldn't. The children (Esther(8years) and Jacob (11 years)) did not feel bad that they will be changing school or leaving their old friends behind. They were so excited that they could not sleep till their mom added some sleeping pills in the milk shake she gave them to drink.

Early in the morning the next day, they packed, put their belongings into the truck and waved goodbye.

A happy start in the new neighbourhood And unimaginable things happening

When they got to their new street. They started taking things to their new apartment. Their new neighbours assisted them to unpack and the family was happy to have such nice neighbours.
The kids were quick to make friends at school and they were very happy.

However, after staying their for some weeks, strange things started happening. Every morning, the Jones family will open their front door to see lots of dirts and rubbish packed in front of their doors. Sandra Jones, wife of Mr Jones asked around to know where it was coming from, and a neighbour was bold enough to tell her that as new people, they will be throwing away trash for the neighbourhood until they decide that it should stop. That it was the custom of the place.

Nonetheless, Sandra removed the rubbish and sternly warned them not to do that again. That was just the Genesis of their problems.

The children were booed and bullied at school, their books torn and confiscated and finally they were they were sent home since they were tagged as trouble makers.

Strange activities started happening very close to their house at night with the beautiful cafe In sight. The couple was banned from going to the cafe.

The pet dogs they had went missing and their carcasses were found in the nearby forest. It also looks like they were used for sacrifices.

One night, a neighbour secretly went to the backyard and called out Mr. Jones, telling him that the city occupants normally have a sacrifice they make to their deity whom they think protects them and since everyone hates him and his family, his daughter would be kidnapped as the sacrificial lamb. He also told him that this was the reason why most people do not come to live here, especially after having such nasty experiences and some even loosing their child.

Mr Jones was surprised at how unsafe and wicked the city and it's inhabitants were, despite the love and calmness which surrounds it when you just come on an outing to enjoy the serenity of the place, what you think you see is not what it is.

He inquired from this neighbour why he was telling him all this? The neighbour told him that he does not want him and his family to be a victim of such cruelty as they seemed to be such a nice family. That if he is seen telling him these things, he too will be executed, little wonder he came under the light of the moon. He urged him to leave that night before the light of the next morning.

Immediately the neighbour left, He immediately went back into the house, told the wife about everything the neighbour said and why they should leave immediately.

So to deceive the neighbours, they put off the lights as if they have gone to bed, the children were woken up from sleep, got their back packs and torches and quietly left the city, without anyone knowing about it.

Fortunately, they did not sell their old house outside the city, so they went back to that old house. The entire Jones Family was very thankful for the neighbour who risked his life to save them. They also realized of the need to be content with what they have, now knowing that the beautiful city and the glamorous cafe was a dangerous place and a dead end to be.

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THEY NOW UNDERSTOOD THE SENTENCE THAT

ALL THAT GLITTERS IS NOT GOLD

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Wow this is a very nce story i am sure you passed through a lot to make this story, thanks for posting this , keep on posting

Thank you for reading my post. I am happy that you loved it. Just wanted to write something interesting and thrilling. Appreciate.

I was literally glue to my screen till I finished reading your story.

One thing is that every story must drive a lesson and from your story, I learned that we should not judge a book by its over.

Thank you for this beautiful story

Certainly, all that Glitters is not good. Look inwards and see the real thing. Appreciate your going through my post.

Wow, the story is so amazing. Not everything seems good, not all people are nice, most people just pretend to be what they are.
The Family thought that because their first day was amazing, the other days will continue that way, it wasn't the case though.
Thanks for sharing.

Yeah, thank your for reading my post. Sometimes, the more we look,.the less we see. Food to dig deeper before making decisions.

🥶🥶🥶 I got literal goosebumps while reading. When I read the title, this was so NOT what I could have imagined. I was like “Wow! That got dark very quickly!”. All that glitters truly isn't gold. Which is why whenever you want to change the are to live in, always find out about the area from the inhabitants themselves and not tourists or real estate agents.

I love your writing style by the way😅. Thank you for sharing. The story really got my attention. Still feeling anxiety crawling through my veins🥶.

Thank you for reading through my story. I tried to see how I can make it interesting and filled with suspense. Thank you for appreciating my work.

It was certainly interesting filled with suspense 👏🏽 .

You're most welcome.

Wow! I enjoyed reading and didn't want it to end. Indeed all that glitters is not gold but I see no reason why children shouldn't crave for more nicer environment though it turned out to be very bad choice all together.
Next time, the family of Mr Jones should ask around before moving into a new neighbourhood.
That also serve as a lesson to we the readers to look before we leap.
Nice and interesting story sir.

Yeah my sister, children craves, parents take decisions. Like you said, more information should be dug out so as to make informed decision.

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What a sad inccident. This wasnt what they expected while moving to their new environment.

But this is a sad reality of some situations. I realy feel so sorry for the children , their expectation became illusion.

I wouldnt want this to happen to anybody 😢.

All of us need what is good and thats why we seek for good things.

This story contains many lessons.

Containment is also feature here, had they stayed in their old environement, they wouldnt have meet this.

Thank you for sharing this intereting story.

You are very correct. Even though we need good things, we should check somethings out before embarking on it. Thank you for going through my post.

You are welcome sir, that was a great piece of art.

What a terrifying story, I love the style of writing that you have since it is not the typical love story.
It's good that the family managed to get out of there alive.

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You really justify the Title of the story with the story you write. And yes one should be more careful while doing anything. Your story is very thrilling and amazing as well.

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I am happy that you love my story. We need to think twice before we ever act thanks for.appreciating my work.

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