Lol. Well, I hope my fandom is not causing marital discord. This was a good read. As a play, it works. For the most part, you did not rely on stage direction for exposition. That's the danger in switching from prose fiction to drama. I think the only line that works like prose instead of drama is the very last sentence. The audience will not read that line; we need to make sure it is expressed (shown) through the action or dialogue.