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RE: "My Favourite Emojis, Stickers, and Gifs"

in Steem4Bloggerslast year

@patjewell, I was eagerly waiting for your review of my post. I was unsure if I should mention you or not. But as I am still waiting with a lot of excitement for learning from you, I could not but take the liberty of mentioning you. Could you please let me know how I can improve or any other tip that you want to give me.

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Hi!

Sorry that I missed your post. I will help with pleasure!

You have written a very nice post. I could relate to it as I was also not sure what these funny things were that people sent me. It is only later on that I realized what it was. It was also then that I started to enjoy them.

As for your post. All you need to do is to make your post a bit neater.

  1. Shorter sentences and paragraphs always help to make reading easier
  2. The 2nd thing is to check your post for mistakes and this you do with Grammarly. I checked this post and found 37 suggestions.

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If you can eliminate these two things I can guarantee you that your posts will look so much neater.

You are more than welcome to CC me in your next post so that I can check if you have implemented the two suggestions and to see if I can give you more advice.

Good luck!

Dear @Patjewell, I am overjoyed to have such an in-depth review from you. You have noticed instantly my number one flaw in the writing. I tend to write longer sentences always. I have tried not to do that but it has been difficult. Hopefully, through writing regularly in Steemit I would be able to improve my writing style. I will also use Grammarly more like you suggested.
It is so kind of you to let me CC you in my future posts. Take my heartfelt gratitude.

 last year 

The pleasure is all mine! 🎕

It is so reassuring to know you struggled with the signs too. I see I am not alone :)

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