@fajrularifst, terima kasih banyak atas respons cepat Anda terhadap tugas ini. Partisipasi Anda sangat kami hargai.

🙏 I hope my translation really expresses in your language, my congratulations for being the first to respond.

An excellent story, with a very western twist at the end.
But this is a challenge of learning and opportunities. Look, although I know that English is the official language of Steemit, I would have liked to see the story written in your language, that as a way of honoring your culture.
I also needed a little more of your reflection on the legend.

GOOD NEWS: if you want, I invite you to put the story in Indonesian and English, and expand your reflection a little more, before proceeding to the evaluation,

Just write, I agree to make the improvement or, on the contrary: evaluate.

I thank you in advance for this approach to your ancestral culture, and many questions arose: how much value do they give to the temples there? Does the number one thousand have any special meaning in your culture or for that legend? Does the title really honor your story?

We read ourselves in this way.