1000 Proofs of Love?

in Venezolanos Steem26 days ago (edited)
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  • Bandung Bondowoso, the son of the Pengging Kingdom who was powerful and mighty
  • Roro Jonggrang, the princess of the Prambanan Kingdom who has a beautiful appearance

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1000 Bukti Cinta?



Bandung Bondowoso datang ke istana Kerajaan Prambanan, yang telah jatuh ke tangannya, dan melihat seorang wanita cantik yang menarik hatinya. Ia ingin menikahi Roro Jonggrang, namun bekas luka kematian ayahnya menjadi alasan kuat untuk menolaknya.

Berhari-hari terkurung dan tertekan, menginisiasi Roro Jonggrang untuk memberikan penawaran yang mustahil untuk dipenuhi "Bangunlah seribu candi untukku, selesaikan sebelum matahari terbit".

Dengan kesaktiannya, Bandung Bondowoso meminta bantuan para jin untuk memudahkannya. Roro Jonggrang panik dan gelisah, berharap pagi segera datang.

Tumpukan jerami dibakar, padi ditumbuk dengan lesung, ayam jantan dikacaukan dan berkokok keras untuk memecah kesunyian. Para jin terkejut, mereka melihat cahaya, "kita harus pergi!" teriak mereka.


Roro Jonggrang: "Jumlahnya 999, kamu gagal"

Bandung Bondowoso: "Kalau begitu, kamu menjadi yang ke-1000"

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English

1000 Proofs of Love?



Bandung Bondowoso came to the palace of the Prambanan Kingdom, which had fallen into his hands, and saw a beautiful woman who captured his heart. He wanted to marry Roro Jonggrang, but the scars of her father's death were a strong reason for rejection.

Days of confinement and pressure, initiated Roro Jonggrang to make an offer that would be impossible to fulfill "Build a thousand temples for me, finish before sunrise".

With his magic, Bandung Bondowoso enlisted the help of the genies, making it easy. Roro Jonggrang panicked and restless, hopefully morning will come soon.

Stacks of straw were burned, rice was pounded with a mortar, roosters were fooled and crowed loudly to break the silence. The genies were surprised, they saw a glow, "we have to go!" they shouted.


Roro Jonggrang: "999 in number, you failed"

Bandung Bondowoso: "If that's the case, you become the 1000th"


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Story Reference

This story is popular in Indonesian society, especially in the Special Region of Yogyakarta and Central Java Province, and is often associated with the creation of one of the temples, namely Sewu Temple (Sewu = A Thousand) in the Prambanan Temple tourist complex. It is not in accordance with the historical path, but this story has been rooted in the cultural traditions of the local community and becomes a unique added value when conveyed to tourists visiting Prambanan Temple.

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This mythical story about Prambanan Temple contains moral values that can be taken when told to children:

  1. Do not act arbitrarily
  2. Do not cheat

Because, both behaviors will find bad rewards.


Thanks to Mr. @joslud and Mrs. @solperez for this challenge, so that I can convey how the cultural characteristics that are the identity of my country.

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 26 days ago 

@fajrularifst, terima kasih banyak atas respons cepat Anda terhadap tugas ini. Partisipasi Anda sangat kami hargai.

🙏 I hope my translation really expresses in your language, my congratulations for being the first to respond.

An excellent story, with a very western twist at the end.
But this is a challenge of learning and opportunities. Look, although I know that English is the official language of Steemit, I would have liked to see the story written in your language, that as a way of honoring your culture.
I also needed a little more of your reflection on the legend.

GOOD NEWS: if you want, I invite you to put the story in Indonesian and English, and expand your reflection a little more, before proceeding to the evaluation,

Just write, I agree to make the improvement or, on the contrary: evaluate.

I thank you in advance for this approach to your ancestral culture, and many questions arose: how much value do they give to the temples there? Does the number one thousand have any special meaning in your culture or for that legend? Does the title really honor your story?

We read ourselves in this way.

Of course, I agree to make improvements, it's my honor, thank you!

I think I've solved it, thank you for your kind advice and opportunity.

Anda membuat sebuah karya naratif di mana Anda membahas topik-topik seperti cinta tak berbalas, hambatan yang harus diatasi untuk mencapai cinta, bantuan kekuatan tidak wajar, penipuan dan kesepian. Saya harap Anda memperhatikan koreksi yang dilakukan oleh @joslud. Izinkan saya memberi tahu Anda, saya menyukai cerita Anda.

As a student, I have to follow the direction of the teachers, and I will be happy to follow all the best inputs for development.
One thing I want to say from my heart, thank you very much for your support.

Saludos.

¡Holaaa amigo!🤗

Tuve la oportunidad de conocer esta historia cuando ví un documental que abordaba la creación de los templos más emblemáticos de Indonesia. Sin embargo, te confieso que conocerlo desde tu enfoque e incluso leyendo la historia que tú nos compraste me permitió comprender que la conocía de una manera muy romántica jajaja.

Me gustó mucho tu narrativa... Te deseo mucho éxito en la dinámica. Un fuerte abrazo💚

Wow, I didn't expect that you already knew this story before, which means you have great insight.

So do you think Bandung Bondowoso really fell in love with Roro Jonggrang?
or was it just to fulfill his desire to get everything?

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Gracias por publicar en la comunidad #Venezolanossteem
Hola amigo, una historia corta con un gran significado, la honestidad siempre debe prevalecer para afrontar los retos de la vida, de lo contario las acciones traerán consecuencias.

Saludos, te deseo mucho éxito en la dinámica.

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