Concurso de Arte y Escritura #94 | Art and Writing Contest #94 | (ESP/EN)

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Concurso de Arte y Escritura #94|versión ESP

Daum se casa con su autómata pedante.
¡O tal vez no!


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Daum se casa con su autómata pedante "George" en mayo de 1920. John Heartfield está muy contento por ello.

Fuente de la imagen Wikipedia

"ella" y "él"
En el fervor artístico del Berlín de los años 1920, una ciudad aún temblorosa por los ecos de la Primera Guerra Mundial, dos almas apasionadas se encontraron. Ella era la esencia misma del arte que respiraba: su danza, su pensamiento, sus poemas eran todos un tributo al tumulto y la belleza de la vida. Él, también artista, capturaba el mundo con su creatividad, que se alzaba contra la opresión y celebraba la libertad.

Cuando se encontraron, fue como si dos estrellas hubieran colisionado, creando una nueva constelación en el cielo de la creatividad. Su pasión era un espectáculo, una simbiosis de arte y amor que los hacía brillar intensamente en el firmamento cultural de Berlín. Sus nombres se susurraban en los cafés, su historia de amor se contaba como una leyenda urbana.

Pero la ciudad a su alrededor estaba cambiando. El peso de una nación que intentaba encontrar su camino después de la devastación de la guerra comenzó lentamente a aplastar el espíritu libre de él. La necesidad de un nuevo orden, de estructura, de renacimiento a través de la repetición rígida y la productividad se infiltró en su arte.

Aunque él era un artista, comenzó a perder su fuego interior, a absorber la rigidez que la sociedad le imponía. Su arte empezó a seguir patrones predecibles. Su vida se estaba convirtiendo en una serie de movimientos medidos, un camino pedante hacia la autodestrucción.

Ella, con su inagotable energía creativa, intentó de todas las maneras reavivar el espíritu artístico de su amado. Sin embargo, cada intento chocaba con la realidad de un él cada vez más distante, su alma antes vibrante ahora adormecida bajo la coraza de una existencia mecanizada.

Con el corazón pesado, finalmente tuvo que aceptar que el hombre que había amado, el artista que había abrazado la vida en todas sus matices, se había convertido en otro autómata de los tiempos. Antes compañero en las expresiones del alma, ahora era una máquina viviente, marcando el tiempo de una sociedad que no dejaba espacio para la belleza desordenada del arte.

Y así, en una noche de lluvia torrencial que parecía llorar por la pérdida de lo que había sido, ella caminó hacia un mañana donde su arte aún podía respirar libre.

Gracias por leer @ibesso
Gracias a @pousinha por invitarme a participar en el concurso, a @solperez para la organización

my invitación: @wakeupkitty @yaladeeds


Art and Writing Contest #94 |versión EN

Daum marries his pedantic automaton.
Or maybe not!


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Daum Marries Her Pedantic Automaton "George" in May 1920. John Heartfield is very glad of it.

Image Source Wikipedia

"she" and "he"

In the artistic fervor of 1920s Berlin, a city still trembling from the echoes of World War I, two passionate souls found one another. She was the very essence of the art she breathed—her dance, her thoughts, her poetry were all tributes to the tumult and beauty of life. He, also an artist, captured the world with his creativity, which railed against oppression and celebrated freedom.

When they met, it was as if two stars had collided, creating a new constellation in the sky of creativity. Their passion was a spectacle, a symbiosis of art and love that made them shine brightly in the cultural firmament of Berlin. Their names were whispered in cafes, their love story told as an urban legend.

But the city around them was changing. The weight of a nation trying to find its way after the devastation of the war slowly began to crush his free spirit. The need for new order, for structure, for rebirth through rigid repetition and productivity seeped into his art.

Though he was an artist, he began to lose his inner fire, to absorb the rigidity that society imposed on him. His art started to follow predictable patterns. His life was turning into a series of measured moves, a pedantic path toward self-destruction.

She, with her inexhaustible creative energy, tried in every way to rekindle her beloved’s artistic spirit. However, each attempt clashed with the reality of an increasingly distant him, his once vibrant soul now dormant under the armor of a mechanized existence.

With a heavy heart, she eventually had to accept that the man she had loved, the artist who had embraced life in all its nuances, had become another automaton of the times. Once a companion in the expressions of the soul, he was now a living machine, keeping the tempo of a society that left no room for the messy beauty of art.

And so, on a night of pouring rain that seemed to weep for what had been lost, she walked away, towards a tomorrow where her art could still breathe free.

Thank you for reading @ibesso.
Thanks to @pousinha for inviting me to participate in the contest and @solperez for the organization

my invitation: @wakeupkitty @yaladeeds

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Triste, pero sabio. Quedan muchos artistas y los dos resultaron no ser almas gemelas.
¿Quizás ella fingía vivir la vida nocturna y era más bien estar acostumbrada a él mientras él se acostumbraba a que ella le mimara?
Me pregunto qué fue de él y si se reencontró. Esperemos que sin remordimientos.

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Gracias, Kitty. Quería expresar la importancia de perseverar en seguir nuestra propia alma para no correr el riesgo de quedar atrapados en una vida que no nos pertenece. Que tengas un buen día, hoy aquí es la fiesta de primavera, hace calor, hay sol y todos están contentos.👋🌻🌈

Spring festival as in New Year?

The "Valborg" celebration is deeply meaningful in Sweden, marking the end of their long, emotionally challenging winter that tends to make them introspective and reserved. I sensed a certain melancholy among them, but as Italians, we did our small part to warm the Swedish souls with our unpredictable flair, bringing smiles wherever we could. Now the holiday is over, and it's back to routine. I'm rested and ready to tackle new challenges. Hello dear Kitty, thank you for always being by my side on the journeys that accompany my life. Wishing you a splendid day.❤️

You rested quickly. So it is back at work?
If the weather is getting better they do not need Italian heat, they can order you again if Father Winter is on his way.

We had a week Steemit fun it's good you are back (routine is less).

I hope you feel better now, less worried.
I'll hang around or check on you.

Now it's bedtime, good morning to you.
🍀❤️

Thanks Kitty, you were late last night, I hope you slept well. As you have seen, I always need you!

Let's delve deeper into upex, perhaps there are percentage ranges to be voted for.

But have you been to Italy lately or have I misunderstood?

Have a good breakfast and you will have a wonderful day.🌻❤️

I believe you did perfectly well without me eating all the salmon!

It's nearly one year ago. Perhaps I make it tk Trieste this summer but first I go to my son. He might visit France for some build a pCO2 low car event but it's terribly organized and he needs to translate the 'manual' and can't stand camping with 1000 men sharing the same toilet 😐

If not another time or perhaps I go to Malta and take a boat to Sicily to see what is left of those islands after the invasion but it depends.

My friend told me her daughter received an invitation for the army so let's see if mine receives one too. My son did not receive one yet but no way they go fight someone else's war.

I will post and write more in freewriters tales&stories italy I think dream steem can be an option although weisser-rabe and dove11 are curators. I bumped into another community/contest where they said everyone can join. I'll see if I can find it back. Fadthalib likes to learn how to write stories let's help him. I asked him if he likes to write one with me in turn. It's how I started here with a collegue writer. He can write and I'll follow and twist and change, it's good for the brain and creativity.

I think to receive a higher upvote by upex you should not upvote but I am not sure. I asked someone. By now he answered each question. My first post only has a few cents.

I will still post my original content only and see if I can grow stories to give better upvotes to those who write. There must be a way without taking a loan and buying Steem for 10,000 euros.

First step with this account is to post elsewhere, if I join a contest I'll post it elsewhere too so I can write how I like (I did it a few times) and see how many times it will be upvoted for at least 1$.
I noticed most votes received are 0, even many big fish only give 0,01 it's goid enough to keep CSI high and the amount of upvotes. If everyone we know would upvote it would look different too.

A happy day, it's shower time.

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I ate all the salmon, but I would have preferred the Dutch Frisian herring. 😋

Beautiful Trieste, I will be in Venice at the end of May for the Biennale; northeastern Italy attracts me, perhaps because I have Venetian origins from my maternal grandmother, even though I was born in Piedmont and moved to Milan out of boredom. 😜

I understand your son: at an event with low CO2 emissions, there will be very few toilets.

Didn’t they translate the manual? “Vive la France.”

We will not leave a good memory to our children about the management of the Mediterranean; I miss Gaddafi, “Vive la France.”

Sending ground troops to Ukraine? “Vive la France.”

You know when I used to say that paradise is on earth? Well, until there is war, then it becomes hell.

I follow you, Kitty; I will study your post, learn Upex and even Ukrainian if needed, post competitions elsewhere, and write about our favorite communities.

It’s Spritz time!

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¡Bravo, @ibesso! Has escrito un texto narrativo impecable : con un inicio, en el que te permites describir la esencia de los personajes principales: ambos artistas, unidos por el amor y la irreverencia ante el mundo mecánico y poco creativo. Luego vino la guerra, que causó escollos en el personaje masculino y lo convirtió en "otro autómata de los tiempos".

Definitivamente, todos podemos llegar a ser muy vulnerables, incluso los más grandes artistas.

Gracias por compartir con nosotros tu talento narrativo. Un abrazo.

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Gracias por ser parte de la Comunidad Venezolanos Steem, la Casa Grande para todos los Sueños Posibles. Tu publicación ha sido Seleccionada para el Programa de Soporte a las Comunidades de las cuentas Booming. ¡Felicitaciones!

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gracias por seleccionarme, estoy agradecido, seguiré escribiendo para esta gran familia👋

Awwww it had a sad ending. If he still had breathe, the fire would still be found. sometimes the automated machine needs a little rest to feel refreshed and start again, other times just another art of interest can reignite the fire, Art can never die.

thank you, let's fuel the fire of our creativity to never be automatons. Have a good day👋🌈

Es verdad, mi amigo. Las guerras traen consecuencias y son enemigas del arte.

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