RE: Crypto Academy / Season 3 / Week 4 - Homework Post for @yohan2on || All About Blockchain cuties universe
Hi @greatness96
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| Rating criteria | Calculation out of 2 |
|---|---|
| Quality of presentation | 1/2 |
| Originality | 1/2 |
| Compliance with topic | 1/2 |
| Clarity of language | 1/2 |
| Quality of analysis | 1/2 |
| Grand total | 5 |
I am glad you were able to play your first ever blockchain video game. Thanks for your review on Blockchain cuties Universe,Though it had quite shallow information on Blockchain Cuties Universe.
When I monitored your article using the Grammarly web application, I found plenty of errors. I recommend that you make good use of that tool in order to minimize on the grammatical errors in your work.
Forinstance;
Dogs
They are loyal companions. They always strive to accomplish difficult tasks and never run away froom challenges.
Change froom to from
Their adventure bonus is defense +2.
Change defense to defence
For example, a player using a unique cat "have" full ownership of it and he can transfer it or "sale" it any time he deems fit.
Change have to has
The word sale is out of context.
Kindly change "Sale" to "Sell"
And many more, that's why you need to always use Grammarly to rectify any errors before publishing your article.
3.There is no provision for an offline adventure, thus people without internet in remote areas can not have access to the game.
This is a general challenge for the entire crypto space. Governments should devise means of helping its people learn the basic practical internet knowledge.
Thank you.