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RE: Contest - Story10: "The Homeless" / "Der Obdachlose"
I think you did a great job of creating engaging characters and an intriguing plot. The story flowed smoothly, and I was captivated from beginning to end. It would be interesting to see how Sarah's father reacts to the situation and how John's involvement with the witness protection program unfolds. Good luck in the contest! 😊
... perhaps the next serial will not be medieval-magical, but crime-adventure... ;-))