Adan had wasted half her life waiting for him. Despite the pressure of her family, she had not married anywhere else. But today, after so long, hearing this voice and this song, Adan came out of the memories of the past and ran to look at the door of the hall. And seeing the face she had been longing for, she started crying. At that moment, Haad also looked at Adan. Having lost himself in the colors of the world, Haad had now come to appreciate real relationships.
I lost the thread of the story with the first lines and wondered: what song, what are you talking about and even clicked on the picture if there was something hidden behind. I went back to the title and though: oh, it's a dream but I lost the thread again and more after I came at the cited text (see above). I am not a reader and I can't continue reading on.
Sorry, girl
@aneukpineung78 and @wakeupkitty I cannot do the #comment and #wewrite. It's too much, too many names, too much info for my brain to work with.
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Ah yes, I just felt it too after paying attention, like there was a missing link. Trivial but very influential. Very interesting.
But even so, it's still an interesting story. Melancholic, poetic. Even though the story develops rapidly in a short structure, we can still feel the solemnity of it.
I think naina9 succeeded, in some measure, in at least keeping me interested.
Thank you so much. Thank goodness I didn't have to explain it to you. Do you know about this song? It's an Indian song, I really like its lyrics, and I translated the song but didn't mention it. It's my mistake. Now I'll have to update my story again so I can correct my mistake.
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Oh sorry, my mistake, I should have mentioned the song. The hero of the story Haad expresses his feelings to his heroine through his song at a concert.
If you were Pakistani, you would know the lyrics of this song. This song is very great. Which I have attached with a story.
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Good you added the information!
I am sorry to hear that but who knows if you read it again it will be better since it's a bit edit?
It's good to mention why you can't read it. Not all texts are meant for everyone.