A world of dreams

in Steem SEA6 months ago (edited)

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While walking on the path, I often feel
As if she is secretly watching me
راہ چلتے ہوئے اکثر یہ گمان ہوتا ہے
وہ نظر چھپ کے مجھے دیکھ رہی ہو جیسے
What a beautiful voice, it seems like the singer is expressing his heart. Shall we also go to this concert?
Maria asks Adan, who was staring blankly at the door of the hall in her own thoughts. She heard this voice after so long.
How could she forget that voice? It was Adan's favorite song and she used to specially request Haad to play it.
Adan and Haad were best friends since childhood and both liked each other. But Haad went abroad to secure a bright his future, he got lost in the charms of that world and forgot Adan.
Adan had wasted half her life waiting for him. Despite the pressure of her family, she had not married anywhere else. But today, after so long, hearing this voice and this song, Adan came out of the memories of the past and ran to look at the door of the hall. And seeing the face she had been longing for, she started crying. At that moment, Haad also looked at Adan. Having lost himself in the colors of the world, Haad had now come to appreciate real relationships.
And now he was back. But now Haad had given up the desire to meet Adan. He did not want to face Adan. At that moment, he looked into Adan's eyes and began to sing her favorite song.

جاگتے جاگتے ایک عمر کٹی ہو جیسے
جان باقی ہے مگر سانس رکی ہو جیسے
ہر ملاقات پہ محسوس یہی ہوتا ہے
مجھ سے کچھ تیری نظر پوچھ رہی ہو جیسے
ایک لمحے میں سمٹ ایا ہے صدیوں کا سفر
زندگی تیز بہت تیز چلی ہو جیسے
اس طرح پہروں تجھے سوچتا رہتا ہوں میں
میری ہر سانس تیرے نام لکھی ہو جیسے

(Indian song lyrics)
[As if a lifetime has passed while staying awake,
As if life remains, but breath has stopped
At every meeting, it feels the same
As if your gaze is asking me something
The journey of centuries has been condensed
into a moment,
As if life has moved too fast,way too fast
Like this, I keep thinking of you for hours,
As if my every breath is written in your name].

But how did the light suddenly go off?
Adan's eyes opened and she began to look at the walls of her room very carefully.

"A series of silent complaints began
Time betrayed and another round of the dream was completed"

When Adan looked at the time, it was three in the morning and now she had to stay awake all night with the help of this beautiful dream.

<The End

Cc:- @aneukpineung78 @wakeupkitty

I used this image because the heroine of the story fills her life with color through dreams. She is living her life alone, betrayed by her love, relying on dreams.

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@aneukpineung78 @wakeupkitty
I will give this writing of mine a score of 9 out of 10. In this writing of mine, I have tried to describe the intensity of silent love.
In the story, I have described a unique state of love in which there is only waiting.
"In the intensity of love, the eyes have lost their sight.
We are waiting but for the sight of the beloved".

#wewrite #comment

Adan had wasted half her life waiting for him. Despite the pressure of her family, she had not married anywhere else. But today, after so long, hearing this voice and this song, Adan came out of the memories of the past and ran to look at the door of the hall. And seeing the face she had been longing for, she started crying. At that moment, Haad also looked at Adan. Having lost himself in the colors of the world, Haad had now come to appreciate real relationships.

I lost the thread of the story with the first lines and wondered: what song, what are you talking about and even clicked on the picture if there was something hidden behind. I went back to the title and though: oh, it's a dream but I lost the thread again and more after I came at the cited text (see above). I am not a reader and I can't continue reading on.

Sorry, girl

@aneukpineung78 and @wakeupkitty I cannot do the #comment and #wewrite. It's too much, too many names, too much info for my brain to work with.


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 6 months ago 

Ah yes, I just felt it too after paying attention, like there was a missing link. Trivial but very influential. Very interesting.

But even so, it's still an interesting story. Melancholic, poetic. Even though the story develops rapidly in a short structure, we can still feel the solemnity of it.

I think naina9 succeeded, in some measure, in at least keeping me interested.

Thank you so much. Thank goodness I didn't have to explain it to you. Do you know about this song? It's an Indian song, I really like its lyrics, and I translated the song but didn't mention it. It's my mistake. Now I'll have to update my story again so I can correct my mistake.
#wewrite #comment

Oh sorry, my mistake, I should have mentioned the song. The hero of the story Haad expresses his feelings to his heroine through his song at a concert.
If you were Pakistani, you would know the lyrics of this song. This song is very great. Which I have attached with a story.
#wewrite #comment

Good you added the information!

I am sorry to hear that but who knows if you read it again it will be better since it's a bit edit?

It's good to mention why you can't read it. Not all texts are meant for everyone.

I liked that picture it's as if she painting the feelings on the wall shows but it isn't quiet clear to me where the song starts and if it's a story or personal thoughts are weaved in.

Do you know how to separate text with this code < br> (you have to take the white space away).

Yes I know this code should I apply this code to the lyrics of the song?

It never crossed my mind that other people might not understand our language and they might get confused after reading this story. I related the story to the song. It is an Indian sad song and I like its lyrics very much.
#wewrite #comment

As log as you write for iwn country readees might understand it but if you cross boarders this will change or we have to change and add a bit extra to make understand what is meant.

I struggled twice with posts of @suryati1 because I couldn't translate/understand the joke she told

#wewrite #comment

 6 months ago 

Maafkan aku teman, mungkin lain kali aku akan membuatnya yang mudah di mengerti untuk semua orang, sungguh jika anda dapat memahami dan tahu artinya saya sangat yakin bahwa anda akan tertawa dan tidak tahu kapan akan bisa menghentikan tawa anda temanku.

Sekali lagi maafkan atas kesalahan yang telah saya lakukan, dan kedepannya saya akan memperhatikannya supaya yang lain juga bisa menikmati bayolan cerita lucu.

Itu bukanlah kesalahan Anda, melainkan kekurangan yang dimiliki oleh para penerjemah. Tidak perlu mencari-cari alasan. Saya melihat mereka yang berbicara bahasa Indonesia bisa tertawa.

🤗🍀♥️

 6 months ago 

Baiklah.... baiklah....dan aku sangat menyayangimu temanku😍🌹

Yes I know this code should I apply this code to the lyrics of the song?

It never crossed my mind that other people might not understand our language and they might get confused after reading this story. I related the story to the song. It is an Indian sad song and I like its lyrics very much.
#wewrite #comment

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