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RE: Write in micro size || I write from different perspectives ||SLC Season 21 || 2nd Week

Update: Fri Nov/08/24

Dear @nishadi89

We want to acknowledge your effort in writing in a language that is not your own. As your teachers in this course, we value your willingness to learn under these conditions.
You receive 0.35 extra points, to balance the language barriers.


I'm glad you're back on Steemit, and that you've decided to participate in this short writing challenge.

I recognize that the translation may affect the way I understand your stories a little, but I'll do my best to find the best in your writing.

Task 1:
The title already tells me that the ant sees no solution to the mess it's in. It would have been great if you wrote how it got into that situation, I couldn't read that. Good use of the first verb conjugation in English.
The feeling of fatality you convey almost leaves the poor ant with no way out.
Good story.

Task 2:
Here, there is no clue as to what caused the situation, fatalism continues, it's not surprising that the next step is death. Good use of the second verb conjugation.

Task 3:
For this task we expected something like a posthumous tribute to the ant, to tell how its life was, from the eyes of another person who did not know it as well.
I am struck by the level of dialogue that you include with the ant after its death. Is this something from your culture? Maybe that explains your intention.

However, it is a conversation between friends, you were asked to talk about it from the third verb conjugation.

Your reflections are very good, but there were times when it seemed that you had not left the role of the ant.

Very good work, remember to make the comments according to the instructions.

Again, welcome.

If you want to ask any questions about your grade, I am at your service to listen to you.

PS. How beautiful I find the writing of the Sinhala language.

OVERALL SCORE: 6,02 pts + 0,35 pts (bonus): 6,75 pts

Tasks 1 + 2 + 3: 6.05/8

Comments: 0,7/2

Translation ✅
Words 1: 116
Words 2: 144
Words 3: 86

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Hello dear,
Thanks for your review.

I am struck by the level of dialogue that you include with the ant after its death. Is this something from your culture?

Yes, this is really related to our religion. I wanted to highlight that.

Hi,

That's something that's interesting to me, do you want to talk more about it?
I'm curious.

I now understand your approach in the third story.
Thanks for replying.

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