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RE: Curing Disease is Bad for Business.

in #health7 years ago

Keep forging the path my friend!

What to do when trust erodes,
all human systems live under the shadow of my doubts.
I run away, leave it behind
But when I arrive their presence shouts

Have they followed me across the Earth?
From all my fears they source their mirth?
Til my death and from my birth
These corrupt systems span the whole worlds girth.

My health, my wealth, money, taxes;
Liberty - oh what a fracas!
What can we do with all this mess?
To forge a better world is our best bet.

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Thank you kindly, @ecoinstant, not only for your up-vote but also the very high compliment that you have paid me. :c) So poetic are your words that I wondered whether they might have been your own and yet so context-appropriate that I am more inclined to believe them your own.

One tweak of perspective at a time...

A better World can be forged. :c)

Yes I was inspired to write that poem after reading your article - I enjoy the way you tackle these issues, break them down, find cartoons... basically I like the way you steem!

Well, it was a 'very' pleasant surprise and you certainly made my day @ecoinstant. :c)

While my writing style 'can' get a little dense sometimes, I understand that such writing isn't for a fair many readers out there. That and people generally appreciate reading in smaller dozes (and cartoons and comics help to ease things - while providing another dimension of thought and entertainment).

My earlier posts weren't like this - and I did encounter difficulties along the way - but now that I've settled into this posting style - I won't be looking back. ^_^

Thank you very much again for the feedback and the darn closest thing I ever received to an eulogy! :c)

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