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RE: STEEMIT GIRL HALO - A Wife's Revenge
congrats. you spent some time on this and the ending was as unassuming as it was horrifying :)
congrats. you spent some time on this and the ending was as unassuming as it was horrifying :)
Thank you, and yes I spend some time on it. This was my first time writing a short story.
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I'll know you have some faith in your writing when you don't start with a photo of you in bikini :) i really don't think it added much to the story. looking forward to your next one.
I used that photo and put the title on it because , I am a wife and the girl in the story adrianna used seduction to get access to the murderer. Not because I had no faith in my writing.
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Your photo at the top was like a book cover , I thought it was a great choice