This is my haiku ⭐ Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku - Issue # 40

in #haikucontest5 years ago (edited)

Greetings and much love to all.

We are facing another haiku exercise proposed by @bananafish based on the photo. On this occasion, @marcoriccardi delights us with a photographic take that, although it lends itself to many interpretations, impressed me by the beauty captured in a natural tunnel, trees that gather to create a portal, whose threshold illuminates steps in the sand and attracts the view toward the unknown if the veil of light were pierced.
If you are excited about the idea of ​​participating in this interesting poetic exercise, you are welcome and the bases can be found here


“Most people think that time is like a river, flowing smoothly and safely in one direction. But I saw his face, and I can tell you ... they are wrong. Time is like an ocean in a storm.”


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[photo by @marcoriccardi]



Este es mi haiku:

umbral alumbra

las arenas del tiempo

dejan rastros

This is my haiku:

light threshold

The Sands of Time

leave traces



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By Zeleira Cordero @zeleiracordero.

17/10/2019

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Great haiku.

Who wrote this quote?

“Most people think that time is like a river, flowing smoothly and safely in one direction. But I saw his face, and I can tell you ... they are wrong. Time is like an ocean in a storm.”

Thanks, @momzillanc! That quote is from the "Prince of Persia in the Sands of Time." At the end of the publication is the quote link.

Hermoso, también note la arena pero me resulto más llamativo ese paso tipo túnel que formo el árbol, muy lindo tu haiku me encanto. @zeleiracordero

Gracias, apreciada @sacra97. Hay más de un viento que alborota las alas de la creación y, frente a esta espectacular foto, la musa escogerá su camino y todos serán buenos.

Qué bonita idea la del reloj de arena!
El tiempo es un umbral que define todo, y hay tantos!

¡Gracias por tu apreciación, @gracielaacevedo! La idea que prevaleció en mi cabeza, ante esa espectacular fotografía, fue la del tiempo y su continuo goteo.

Generalmente no uso metáforas en el haiku, pero esta vez me inclino ante el resultado ... ¡Me estremezco de emoción!

Oh!.. Es tan emocionante llegar desde mi ser a su ser, que me quedo sin palabras que agradezcan suficientemente las suyas, @bananafish.

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