This is my haiku ⭐ Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku - Issue # 40

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Greetings and much love to all.

We are facing another haiku exercise proposed by @bananafish based on the photo. On this occasion, @marcoriccardi delights us with a photographic take that, although it lends itself to many interpretations, impressed me by the beauty captured in a natural tunnel, trees that gather to create a portal, whose threshold illuminates steps in the sand and attracts the view toward the unknown if the veil of light were pierced.
If you are excited about the idea of ​​participating in this interesting poetic exercise, you are welcome and the bases can be found here

“Most people think that time is like a river, flowing smoothly and safely in one direction. But I saw his face, and I can tell you ... they are wrong. Time is like an ocean in a storm.”

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[photo by @marcoriccardi]

Este es mi haiku:

umbral alumbra

las arenas del tiempo

dejan rastros

This is my haiku:

light threshold

The Sands of Time

leave traces

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By Zeleira Cordero @zeleiracordero.

17/10/2019

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     5 years ago 

    Great haiku.

    Who wrote this quote?

    “Most people think that time is like a river, flowing smoothly and safely in one direction. But I saw his face, and I can tell you ... they are wrong. Time is like an ocean in a storm.”

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       5 years ago 

      Thanks, @momzillanc! That quote is from the "Prince of Persia in the Sands of Time." At the end of the publication is the quote link.

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       5 years ago 

      Hermoso, también note la arena pero me resulto más llamativo ese paso tipo túnel que formo el árbol, muy lindo tu haiku me encanto. @zeleiracordero

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         5 years ago 

        Gracias, apreciada @sacra97. Hay más de un viento que alborota las alas de la creación y, frente a esta espectacular foto, la musa escogerá su camino y todos serán buenos.

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           5 years ago 

          Qué bonita idea la del reloj de arena!
          El tiempo es un umbral que define todo, y hay tantos!

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             5 years ago 

            ¡Gracias por tu apreciación, @gracielaacevedo! La idea que prevaleció en mi cabeza, ante esa espectacular fotografía, fue la del tiempo y su continuo goteo.

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               5 years ago 

              Generalmente no uso metáforas en el haiku, pero esta vez me inclino ante el resultado ... ¡Me estremezco de emoción!

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                 5 years ago 

                Oh!.. Es tan emocionante llegar desde mi ser a su ser, que me quedo sin palabras que agradezcan suficientemente las suyas, @bananafish.

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