Zombies and Treeforts
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6 years ago in #haikucontest by tristancarax (66)
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Zombies and Treeforts
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I upvoted your post.
Keep steeming for a better tomorrow.
@Acknowledgement - God Bless
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I like the way you put sound to the image, writing about the bird song after the kireji
(The other haiku made me laugh and I think I'll go and write one too - Marco)
I struggled to find something that would break away from the first two lines and show the passage of time (which is what I was going for in the last line). Took an hour to come up with 8-)
I had fun with the zombie. Steven Austin popped in my mind. I don't even like watching wrestling. That gif helped. I found it after I wrote what I did. Perfect!
(best bump ever.)
Ha! I don't even like wrestling. Stone Cold came to mind. It was too good to pass out. Then I found the perfect gif after the piece was written.
Your Steve Austin haiku had me cracking up - more so once I reached the GIF! 😁
I like the lovely moment you created with your haiku!
I'm glad you enjoyed it. 8-)