I like the way you put sound to the image, writing about the bird song after the kireji
(The other haiku made me laugh and I think I'll go and write one too - Marco)
I like the way you put sound to the image, writing about the bird song after the kireji
(The other haiku made me laugh and I think I'll go and write one too - Marco)
I struggled to find something that would break away from the first two lines and show the passage of time (which is what I was going for in the last line). Took an hour to come up with 8-)
I had fun with the zombie. Steven Austin popped in my mind. I don't even like watching wrestling. That gif helped. I found it after I wrote what I did. Perfect!