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RE: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku - Edition # 39 (English)
Yes the blues! I was also struck with them - the blues that are not quite blue. I'm glad you put them in your piece, I couldn't quite do it.
And no birds! That's what is missing - I couldn't put my finger on what was not there. But as you say, they are not gone forever, this is just one moment in time. I get a sense of sadness from your haiku, grief maybe.
Very very nice haiku.
Your comment is very beautiful. The blues were obvious. Even with different shades the sky and the sea will always be blue. But birds, as in Noah's Ark, birds indicate a sign of life, a sign of hope; and although they are not there, I feel them.
Thanks again and regards @owasco