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RE: Mizu No Oto Haiku Contest - Week #18 - @bananafish

in #haikucontest5 years ago (edited)

Welcome to Mizu No Oto!
I also like the third verse, with its question suspended in the void, left to the perspective of the reader. A little like seeing the glass half full or half empty.

P.S. Don't forget to vote for your favorite haiku under the special comment in the prompt post

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Thank you. As below I am new to this. In creating this thing I was trying to follow some of the guidelines. It mostly felt like contrivance to get it to fit all the model ideas.

Not the last verse. It just worked.

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